17A: Elevator Pitch No.2

Elevator Pitch No. 2

The feedback I received did not relate to the actual video I made for the pitch but more of the pitch itself. Feedback entailed information that there is similar technology that exists for places like Disney World. One peer also mentioned that he shares this problem that I am addressing which made me more confident that this would be appreciated.

I did not change much based on the feedback that I received because it did not provide me with anything I could change in the video. One thing I did change was adding a thumbnail to appear more professional.